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hope we see an update soon

I always believed that if they ever would put them together in situations where they had to depend on each other, that Sesshoumaru, in his own way, would be more appreciative of her capabilities than Inuyasha. I always liked his personality better than Inuyasha's in the anime. Verbal abuse can be more damaging than physical most of the time. Inuyasha could be sweet and he was mentally scarred, too, but that was still no excuse for him verbally abusing Kagome. It was touching that she tried to defend him. Where was her power, even a small amount? It usually flares up when she gets very angry or highly upset because of her lack of training. That was another thing about the anime that irritated me. They never wrote into the story for her to further her training and grow stronger. They left her physically weak and her miko powers never getting any stronger. She was always yelling for Inuyasha to save her only to be later verbally abused. I've got quite a few years behind me and life has taught me that in order to survive, you cannot be that kind of female. I always hoped they would mature her into a survivor. Sango was always my ideal of a female warrior. Now if she had been given miko powers, she would have been a force to reckon with. She was already trained in physical combat and had the mental attitude of depending on no one but herself. She was a true survivor. I hope you make your Kagome a survivor.

I admire the fact that you still do a story for us english speaking people when english is a diffrent language than what you normally speak. Just so you know you didn't have to many more spelling mistakes than the normaly english speaking writters! You'll have to take someone elses word on grammer as I am horrid at it! ^_^ Your story is really a great and interesting tale. It's one of the best of this pairing that I am currently reading! I hope you update soon!

Ja ne!^.~

your beta is not very talented. there were many spelling mistakes,words missing, i wondered if you were an english speaker.

i like the story so far and you are doing real good and i cannot wait for more of the story and see what happen next and see if kagome can help him and see if he will let her help him .. and see if that kagomes friends help find her. and who have them in the cell. up date soon i can not wait for more of the story. keep up the good work on your story.

cool :) i can't wait for the next chapter :) this is a great story and i can't wait to see what happens

love it even more!!!!

I love it!!!! Its funny.