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for Captured and Trapped

by StephanieG

person Foxfirek
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really happy you updated. I really hope that naraku does not win in his evil plot to get kagome to have sex with him. Besides if he forces her to be "willing" isn't that still rape? I really like the idea that Mikos can't be raped by demons. I hope kagome gets to tell sesshomaru what naraku wants from her I wonder what his reaction will be next time he sees her?
person puppydog
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was good. Another chappy yay!!!! Please continue with the story.
person Sesshoumaru23
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is an amazing story. Please update soon I just love where this is going. I can't wait for more chapters I just wanna keep hitting the new button and it be updated!
person Anon
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Sesshou's
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're evil. That little cliffy on chapter 9. Ohhhh please write more!!
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I was terrified that naraku was gonna brutally rape her, it sure sounded like that from sesshoumaru's perspective, but at least some sort of torture would have to pass for it to make sense. Naraku's little confession and the end of the chapter had me spinning, he wants kagome, I dont know if to be grossed out or not...lol. So please update soon and I am still looking out for that sequel to that brilliant story "In the Elevator"...sigh. Keep up the good work and update, update.
person puppydog
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What! No! More please! Do more! That last chapter was not nice! More please?
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i was starting to get sick by think of him and kikyo ewwww! Good chapter please update soon
person kat_me
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY! Wooooo! yah... that was... slow, that chapter did not really have the same momentum as the others. dont get me wrong! it was good! just not quite up to par, oh well the next one looks promising.
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is getting so good!!!! Update!!!!! Please and thank you!!!! XD