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for Captured and Trapped

by StephanieG

schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter i loved it please update soon.
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Cliffhanger? No, please continue!
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love your story. You can almost feel the pain theat Kagome is in. Hoping for more.
person sesshoumarulover
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Horray I was so glad to see that you had updated. THanks for that I was waiting so badly I couldn't stand it you are such a good writer please continue much appreciation!
person Lina03
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH wow, I can't wait to see how Sesshoumaru's beast is going to react to that! Great chapter, thank you for updating. ^_^
person sam
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
holy shit. im loving this story! please please please continue!
person Anon
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this chapter cant wait till the next one
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh . . . . My . . . . I can't wait for more!! Update!!!! PLease and thank you!!
person snowbird
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What an insane plan! It's bad enough to want to force her to bare his child, but to absorb it is horrible. If he somehow succeeds in impregnating her, the child will be innocent and will not deserve the fate he has planned. The type of person Kagome is she will do everything she can to protect her baby, no matter who the father is because part of the child will be from her. If this does happen, Inuyasha for sure will treat her even worse than he already does. If it weren't for the fact of her ability to detect the shards, he would probably expell her from the pack. I think she's stupid for having a crush on him to begin with and to take the crap from him that she already does.

If this is your plan, I'm curious to see how you plan to weave Sesshoumaru in to be her protector while she carries Naraku's child and then to help protect it once it's born unless I'm completely way off the plot.
person snowbird
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy! I just had an idea hit me from out of the blue. It's like, wild. If whatever he tries can't make her rut with him, then make her somehow agree to rut with Sesshoumaru. Sesshoumaru's youkai powers would be stronger that Naraku's mixed with the miko powers in the child. So Naraku would not only be absorbing Kagome's miko powers but Sesshoumaru's youkai powers. Why did Naraku not think of that? Make use of Sesshoumaru while he has him. Naraku's always wanted Sesshoumaru's powers anyway. Through the baby, he could have both just like I said.