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December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can u update this soon its a great story and has a lot of potential but your killing us here with the time between updates. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!? IM BEGGING U!! Y_Y
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December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More, more. more!!!!!!
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December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you do love that, don't you... so cliffy... get on with it... please... please update soon...
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November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say that I absolutely love the story and can't wait for you to update. Keep up the great work.
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November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Its not a problem hun. I love working on this story and it makes me feel special to be able to see these chapters before anyone else. HEhehehe. I should have the edits for earlier chapters done soon!
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November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! Can't wait for them to be together!!! Update as fast as possible!! Please and thank you!
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November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay that was a good chapter. I really love this story and I double check it almost every day in hopes of updates. I wonder what shape kagome is in and how sesshomaru will react to her. I hope she can at least talk to him I really want to see how he will react to what naraku wants from her. I also wanted to say that there is nothing wrong with your writting. I noticed some people left negative reviews to that effect and you should just ignore them. Trust me I aced all three of my college English classes and I have read esseys in those courses with more errors. Really some people will complain about anything even though they couldn't do any better. And yes this is filled with errors but I am typing on my I-phone and just don't care. Still I love this story a ton and really look foreward to more.
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November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
She's proving to be tougher than Naraku thought she would be. She might change her mind and give in to stop the pain if she knew that Naraku had decided to use Sesshoumaru instead to impregnate her. Like I said before, Sesshoumaru's youki is much stronger than Naraku's. If he did use Sesshoumaru, I believe he'd keep him around afterwards as a means to keep Kagome in line with the threat of killing him if she misbehaved. Of course, I'm sure you'd have them figure out some way of escaping. I love trying to figure out plots and then seeing how good or bad I did as the story unfolds.
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November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow... wow.. your making me hate naraku more and more. and i already hated inuyasha so your just adding to the thought that hes and imbical (bad spelling haha) wow.... loved the cutting up of kag though haha had me laughing...
-sam
-sam