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for In The Elevator

by StephanieG

person Anon
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww I want more!!!!!!!!~
person Noacat
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you so have to write a sequel! You can't leave it there!!

Side note... I noticed an error in word choice. You used 'premeditating' which means to meditate, consider, or plan beforehand, when you meant 'permeating' which means to be diffused through; pervade; saturate. Just thought ya oughta know.

Anyway, happy writing! And I'm crossing my fingers for a sequel.
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Quite an arousing situation. *whips drool away* I believe Sesshoumaru-sama will not be able to find anyone who could surpass the sexual experience Kagome just gave him.
Write more eh! I would love to read more of your works
person paulymoon
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sequel, sequel, sequel...great job
person L0VER
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. awesome story! great job. I love the looong chapters, seriously. the quality was very constant too. nothing disappointed me:D, I'm not asking for a sequel ..but I hope you start another story! Another kag/ses. You portray sess perfectly. :):)
schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story please finish it..
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay i liked it that was great hooray for sexual situations hahaha i am loving this story so far im not goin to be like everyone else and start typing "update soon update soon" no i say waiting for the next chapter to come out is beter than pressuring the author to write another chapter so i eagerly await your next chapter ^.^
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
just wanted to let you know that i have enjoyed this story very much! i'm looking forward to the next chapter to find out if sessho is going to "hire" her... for her brains, her beauty, or both!
person sugar0o
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lmao i dont think that was a "some sexual moment" haha that was a lemon! and it was wonderful that was wow, thats all i can say, though man alive they fell asleep? someone's gunna find them, and then ....i wonder if she's gunna get the job? hahaha hopefully its not friday.
person Anon
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

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