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Okay, you've set the stage; where's the rest of the act?

I love this story.. Sex slave, huh? Can't wait for an update!

Oh very interesting! I'm in love with the story so far. Good job on it. Hope to see more! Keep up the good work!!!!

Hmm. Very good start.
I love how Inuyasha has not lost his trickyness. I desire longer chapters though.
Little more description on side characters and surroundings.
Can't wait until the third chapter.
Faithfully,
~Harlequin, Masked Deciever

This has a lot of fucking promise, damnit! ^_^ I just wish that the chapters were longer so I could sink my teeth into more story. You're an excellent writer with a real talent, so I would suggest that you take the time to post longer chapters. You'll also get a better response that way. Crappy writers I would expect to post stupid short chapters, but you're not one of them. Trust me. Post longer chapters. Good luck and I'll look forward to future chapters and where you'll be taking this fic.

Love and Kisses
Kogas Hentai Luver