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Kat extends her index finger and pokes the author of her new favorite story in the ribs a couple of times, seeing that this is clearly not enough encouragement to make her release the next chapter she shouts "Come on! out with it already!" With a satisfied look on her face she waits quietly for a few moments before adding "And make the chapters longer too!"

lmao nice! i cant wai for the next chapter, please update soon.

intriguing so far, can't wait to see what he has in store for her. try not to get a bad case of the block yet, there's so much you have to explain!! i understand that it can be tough, though. just remember to look for inspiration everywhere. as for me, i oftentimes find myself inspired at the most inopportune times (work, shopping, etc.) sometimes carrying around a notepad to jot down ideas when you absolutely cannot make it to a computer. anyway - i'll be quiet now. i hope to see an update soon! i like it so far. ; )

Interesting. I am so curious just what is going on in sesshoumaru's head, (oh, assuming it's him) considering he's still his normal bastard self, except for the not killing and the kissing part.
which makes me wonder what changed, eh? :-)

I suggest you stop complaineing and start writing. I really like the story thus far and I suggest you get a move on in it. my e-mail adderss have changed. I have a few ideas if you want to here them. my e-mail address is AquaSpirit21@comcast.net hope to see some more chapters soon.


Dawna Sama

Well, I feel like IY fanfiction is going through a dry spell of some kind. I like your fic. You helped making searching for fics worth while. I really am interested to know what is going to happen next here. I hope that you don't get writer's block just yet. As in, if you're going to have one, put a lemon in or something, to keep your reader's appetites up and running for more...like we can actually control when we get a block. Anyway, The pace of the fic is good as well. The way you began it was rather confusing but that just made the reader more sympathetic to Kagome. So good. Good fic, good writing, good flow. I hope that's enough to keep you going. Bye now.