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by Keija819

schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol, this is a fantastic story so far!! I love sess and kags together. I also love that Kags still has all that fight in her despite everything...It's great when she really annoys sess...it makes for good chemistry! Great story, can't wait for updates!! I will beg if I have to, I am quite shameless that way.
person sugar0o
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i actually like were this is going, the duality of being such a pure being as our litle Kagome is, being into S&M type stuff is very amusing. She's such a match to his dark composures, she's his exact opposite. its perfect, i adore this story. please keep up the wonderful world.
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the direction of the story, even though his end plan is still quite a mystery. This Sessh seems to be a big old perv with the tube dress and the maid's outfit. Whatever will he make her wear while she is his personal servant.
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like the way its going so far. its has got a good twist to it. im looking forward to reading more soon
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOooooo, I have to say, this story appears to be very interesting...I can't wait to see what you do to it in further chapters! Great work...good luck on future work! :)
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG MORE please update
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
See? I told you that all you need to do was stop complaining and start typeing. congradulations on your story so far. I really enjoy it. I hope to see more from you soon.


Dawna Sama
person sugar0o
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lmao. omg i want to know what's going on s0o0o0o0o0o0o bad, why does he need her for a month? and how does it relate to his vanity? what happens when she goes back to the past, surely he has to have thought that she could go back and kill him? haha too many questions!!!!
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow this sounds very interesting. im looking forward to finding out what he wants with her.
person Amadoni
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, this is getting intesting. I'm honestly not sure where you are going with this. I really would like an explanation of how she got there, he got there, and why the month is important. But I'll wait a little while longer since you're updating so fast. Keep up the good work.