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How can Kagome feel something for him when he is abusing her physically and mentally along with humiliating her? To me that is such a turn off. I think she is being a bit of a wimp, too. I'm not so young anymore and life has taught me to be a fighter. I guess that's why I'm so disappointed that she hasn't put up more of a resistance than she has. Sure, resistance sometimes involves pain but that's life. Where's her pride? My pride and independence has made me a fighter all my life. I have to admit that he has me totally confused. I get frustrated when I'm confused for too long. What's with his mirror fetish? I'm beginning to think that he's mentally unstable, living and thinking the way he does. One thing stood out to me. Evidently she has not reached the point in time in the past where she gave him his arm back. So why is he unconcerned that she may end up killing herself at the end of the month from whatever he has planned for her? Did he not stop to think that if she did, then his arm would disappear? Plus other things in his future may change with her not finishing her mission in the past. I guess his craziness is not letting him think logically on everything. I know you've got answers for his actions and they may turn out to be perfectly sane ones, but for now to me he's loonie and not a turn on at all. I look forward to future updates that will begin to explain his actions. As I said, I get frustrated with confusion.

you tease! omg i'm completely upset right now, i want more! so much and so little at the same time, what have you done to our Sess and Kags, you've kept them delightfully in character and yet so completely OOC its amazing and bizare and fantastic, and i'm completely enthralled to levels i'm amazed by. wonderful. update! yours, - r0o

hey! I see that many other viewers are questioning your .....motive. But i'm not one to complain, even though a lot of things are still unclear, i think the story is flowing nicely. And i'm not even going to fusterate myself in guessing what's really happening cause i'm sure you're gonna clear it up (RIGHT?!) and it'll be awesome. And Sesshomaru is so... EVIL , gosh. kissing her like that just to ...insert more poison? But I like how it's...dark , but ...pretty hot. AHA, ohhgosh. UPDATE SOOOOON :):)

I like that you are bread crumbing us along on this story. It has me kind of frustrated, but at the same time that puts me in the smae perspective as the two main characters. As far as night vs day, so many possiblities to explore it is hard to choose.

Emily

again i think i reviewed this chapter but maybe i didn't since its letting me... either way i wonder why he's so utterly vain but then i have an odd feeling that this whole mirror thing, and getting Kags to submit in such an odd way is like demon courting. I'm sure he can't really go abotu normal demon courting with someone like Kagome. AS much as most authors just having her willingly being weak and only having random bouts of heroine wisdom, i think she's a lot stronger then most authors give her credit for. She's fiery, she's rambunctious, she's completely and utterly unpredictable, and she's got a temper. I've always said i was surprised that she didn't ever just kill Inu with those Sits in the anime and the manga. either way i'm still completely interested in this story and cannot wait for the next update. please do so soon, i want to see what kinda crazy Sess has in store for her now.

Just a ps.
I always wanted to write a fic with Kags finding Kikyo and INu in the woods, her running off only to stop dead in her tracks and go back and lands like a flying spinning kick into Kikyo's face... I s0o0o0o know thats mean but i cant help it, have you any idea how many have her see, run, cry, bump into demon lord... etc etc, sex, love, preggers. i think its bleh and this story has none of that, you even told us he's gunna give her back willingly. makes ya wonder what he's gunna do between now and then. and what she's gunna do the next time she see him in the F.Era O_O write that!

I'm interested to find out where this is going. If she goes back in time and finds the younger Sess she'll still have to obey him right? That could be interesting. Wonder if she even gets back to the past. Well it's bookmarked I'll just have to check back in later huh?

it took me an entire day to read soo far what u wrote.. its really really good.. needs some description.. but u nailed her feelings down beautifully.. the beginning is very well crafted.. im a bit confused as to why she went home for a month?? school?? family issue's?? uhh.. needed to get away and be home?? and does her family even know whats going on??

this is the only confusing factor in the story.. i like the way u make the feelings and musing of the sessh soo critical, um very stoic and aristocratic. very him. what about inuyasha?? is he in the future too???

man its soo many things to think about.. u really have me hooked!!

cant wait for the next installement.

This has turned out to be an intriguing story that leaves me dying to know what the whole 'plan' is about. I think that I am with Kagome on this one though, Sesshomaru is showing definite signs of kinkiness. And the mirror thing... well, that's just crazy. Maybe the past 500 years hasn't been too good to the old guy. Might be a screw loose beneath all that pretty hair. It will be interesting to see what you have planned for them in future chapters. Thanks for the read! ~Rin

hmm you've got me wondering just why he's hiding mirrors, yet oddly i find it weird that Kags hasn't thought that maybe Sess just survived the time frame from then to now. Its not like she kept it very secret just jumping in and out of the damned able well all the time, Hanyou included. so i dunno, i don't think Kags would mind all that much she's forgiving, and doesn't seem bothered by the fact that Inu's abotu 150 if you don't count his time pinned to the tree, 200 in that case. - r0o

ps. no problem for me keeping up. ^_^