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for Captivity

by Keija819

person Crysan
schedule February 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. I do hope you update soon. I am waiting with bated breath.
person marcia
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I, um, forgot about this story until I saw it today. I hope you decided to update more frequently. It's always a pleasure to read it and try to figure out where you're going with it. Even if it is a hopeless task to do so.
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Will sesshomaru really be different when he will come back? It fells like the clothes the other girl gave Kagome is more than just that...but what? Hm. Was it clothes of sess' wife?
Gah! I can't wait to read more! please, update as soon as possible, I'm begging you!!!
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey glad u liked my review and was happy and interested in my questions. This chapter did answer some of my thooughts and questions and it was a good chapter, I have a feeling i know who sesshoumaru's wife was and it explains alot that he mentally lost so now that explains his behaviour. Snowbird was right he is crazy, poor sesshy and although the last cliffy was something, I am so glad he didnt go through with defiling her like that. It was a good chapter cant wait to read more.

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person Moonieh
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i have to wonder is that rape
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story, I have read all 11 chapters and I have to say Wow, and WTF, alot of things are still confusing me but I guess that it will sort itself out in the end, and the chemistry between the two of them is well written and the anomostity is present, Your sesshoumaru pisses me off but u had me on the floor with that sort of cliffy u left in chap 11, *clears throat and looks nervously over shoulder* That was hot and I cant wait to read more.

schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As I said alot of things confused me and when I reading your reviews I realized snowbird highlighted a bunch of them especially the dangers of time and her pride and the way she should be fighting him (but I guess he reintroduced the poision in her viens so it will be harder for her to fight at some points...case in point cliffy at the end of the chapter *still looking nervous*), so maybe these things will be explained but other than that I am a hungry person for knowledge and I cant help but agree with her. The story has an interesting storyline like I said before and I like it its me being curious as I am an analytical person. Its just thrist for these answers not a reflection on your story, hope u understand.

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Scarlet
person pcpalomo
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
all i ask is for u to continue the story. normally i wouldn't take the time to review because we have to log in but for this story i couldn't help myself. please4 please continue the story
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loved your story so far! please keep it up and if possible, could you e-mail me once you've updated? thanks in advance and keep it up!! :)
person marcia
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay new chapters since I was last here! I'm still unsure of what he's planing but I'm looking forward to finding out.