rate_review Reviews

how do you ever manage to pack so much emotion into your words? i love your writing style. your stories always make me feel. i'm just not sure how i feel. the emotions they evoke stay with me for a long while.

you have an amazing vision. i hope you never quit sharing it.

i really like your style of writing, going inside their heads, and sesshomaru's demented honesty. i look forward to your next update

nice!!! has brought the story to life!!wud lov to read more !!

So sayith the Raven never more.... THIS WORD PLAY THIS BRINGING OF WORDS BRING MY MIND TO IT KNEES PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE GIVE US MORE!

That was beautiful. I raced through the entire thing because it ws just so mesmerising, I didn't want to lose the affect it was having on me, it was lovely but disturbing at the same time. How can you describe things such as killing and necrophilia and make them sound beautiful? Thats the talent of a true writer.
Please cotinue soon, count me amoung your fans :).

This is intriguing. A bit hard to follow at times, but after reading chapters1 and 2 again, I am straight on everything!

yes, i was confused in places. but it was a good confusion. it made me want to read more to help set things in order in my mind. i know i said this before, but the intensity with which you write is amazing. the wording and the point of view you gave to your narrator had just the right amount of edginess. inuyasha's innter turmoil and denial were done to perfection. any more would have been overkill, any less would have led to confusion. i liked it, but more importantly, i'll keep thinking about it

DAMN!!! Look, my email is nchsmi8@aol.com or Nikkie34@yahoo.com. Let me know when you post the next chapter, PLEASE!!! B reading U!
L8r!