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DAMMIT, HURRY UP AND WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!

THIS STORY IS TOO INTERESTING!

I like it !!! actually i like both of the story's you are writing right now.
In chapter 2 it's nice to see that things aren't immediately good between the two of them. Would have been a little weird if it was seeing that 500 years without someone, thinking she has abandoned you, will probably change confuse your feelings to say the least. What I'm kinda wondering though is why does he think that she has abandoned him. If he would have gone to the well and jumped in he would have noticed what had happened to the well right? I mean normally he would have gone after her if things took to long for his liking and he does seem to know she was pregnant when she left.
Sorry if I'm to fast and if this explanation comes on later but that's the only thing i have a hard time making sense of.
Pls hurry with the next chapters (both in this as the other story) I cant wait to read more!

I can't wait for chapter 3. I loved the first two. I enjoy this story alot, please update again soon!

I can't wait for chapter 3. I loved the first two. I enjoy this story alot, please update again soon!