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for A Matter of Trust

by InitialA

person Anon
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great update... glad that kagome & inuyasha are getting to be more comfortable with each other... with shippou & itazura staying with them and in kagome's room and inuyasha suggest kagome stay in his room... maybe things will warm up between inuyasha & kagome... really nice of inuyasha to go with kagome to the doctor's appointment... how will inuyasha do in the lamaze class though... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
person Mia
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do plan of sticking on it, this is definitely one of the fics I check for updates consistently. I liked this chapter, I like the addition of Shippou in the house (at least for a while), I'd like to see their dynamics after the amount of time that has passed. And I love that it's so evident that while they both still retain their rudimentary characteristics (stubbornness and such) that they've quite matured, so it's not like watching two fifteen year olds having a baby, I do actually see that they're older in this fic. Oh and I am looking forward to Inuyasha in lamaze classes. Hee!

Just a little thing, why do you have to put Kagome in a denim jumper? I hope I'm not stepping on anyone's toes, but denim jumpers are just so...not flattering. I often see them on pregnant woman and it literally depresses me. Then again the girl wore sun dresses with nondescript cardigans, so in a way it's in character.
person debEdoo
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Again... I love how you have Inuyasha acting. I mean, how is a father supposed to act when he see's his baby for the first time? And I think it's 20 times worse with him. He was so frikin happy about having someone understand and accept him, that I think he forgot about the other pro's of being loved. I'm happy with how you had him react to it all. It's perfect. And yes, I completely agree about the boob thing. I have em'. I don't need a diagram showing me every cell in them... lol...
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this, keep up the good work! Cute bit with AmeriCone Dream, one of my faves!(and I agree with you about S.C. - and he's seriously hot in person, too)
person Raida
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello. I just wanted to say how much I am enjoying the story and that I can't wait for the next chapter. I just hope that you don't get writers block cause that would just be a pain in the ass, not only to you but to your readers as well. Anyway, keep up the good writing.
person Youkai06
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finally signed in so I can review your very excellent story!! I am all caught up and the story is great. Keep up with it.
person Xagzan
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Shippo was a commy. Heh, he had some pretty interesting travels in the last hundreds of years there, didn't he.
person Lynn
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story!!!!!!! Can't wait to read more!
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I love Inuyasha's reaction to the omelet, I can just hear his taste buds screaming. That was a great place to end this chapter. Cliffy's are good. LOL
person erika
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey!

i wasnt sure of this story when i first read it, but i am loving it more and more!! thanks for a great read!