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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“It is, after all, my birthday.”
= Greatest line I have seen in the story.
= Greatest line I have seen in the story.
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a good update. I got really excited when I saw two new chapters for me to read. I am enjoying this story. I am getting ready to wham their heads together because fate has given them a second chance to be together after all the extraordinary events that it took for them to be together.
Well, you take care. I will be watching for another update!
Well, you take care. I will be watching for another update!
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeay :P the explanation! haha ok it was worth the wait and i must say i can imagine this happening the way it did. InuYasha was never the one knowing what to do with his own feelings aswell as with the feelings of others. Most of the time he tries to run from them so this fits very well. Oh I just love dancing!! I wouldnt mind dancing a walz with him either. me = jealous. Cute that he tells her there that he wants to talk to her later. Ok thats my review for now :P I'm awaiting the rest ;) keep it up!
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww. this was cute.
his reasoning was a lot less secretive than I was thinking.
his reasoning was a lot less secretive than I was thinking.
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting thus far, I was wondering how and when Kagome would blow up on Inuyasha. Keep it coming.
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol, I've been reading this story when there was only like 4 or 5 chapters on it...i just realized I never once left a review. lol, my bad. So hear it is. This story is awesome I love how you've written it it is just halarious and seem down to earth for an Inuyasha fic (that means it's really really good). So Keep up the great work...lol and I will try to remember to leave a few more reviews.
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Rin is cheerful isn't she... Very good job of describing her as an adult, better than some others I've seen. And very angsty first part of the chapter. Hormones talking?
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is really good.
maybe I'm just being really slow, but I can't figure out at all Inu Yasha's real reasoning behind not finding Kagome. I'm really curious to find out.
I hope you update soon.
maybe I'm just being really slow, but I can't figure out at all Inu Yasha's real reasoning behind not finding Kagome. I'm really curious to find out.
I hope you update soon.
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm back!!! :D and without broken bones but with a nice tan!
And it's been worth the wait :3 It was great to be able to read a lot of chapters after one another. I can't help it I just love reading. I liked the last
chapter where InuYasha refused to put of his concealment ring. The I won't do it if you won't do it thing is so typical for Kagome and InuYasha it's fun to read and very recognizable. And Shippo is here !!! Yeay! he's so cute. I like the way you got Kagome to realise he isn't a little kid any more. Again looking forward to the next chapter. Gotto go now dinner is ready :D bye!
And it's been worth the wait :3 It was great to be able to read a lot of chapters after one another. I can't help it I just love reading. I liked the last
chapter where InuYasha refused to put of his concealment ring. The I won't do it if you won't do it thing is so typical for Kagome and InuYasha it's fun to read and very recognizable. And Shippo is here !!! Yeay! he's so cute. I like the way you got Kagome to realise he isn't a little kid any more. Again looking forward to the next chapter. Gotto go now dinner is ready :D bye!
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please tell me he didn't get another mate. PLEASE tell me! I don't think I could take that. As far as the story's going...you already know I love how Inuyasha reacts to everything. The fact that Kagome pushed him away with a barrier made me howl. I'm anxiously awaiting your next update!