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for A Matter of Trust

by InitialA

person Chikyu
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeay! Congratulations with the birth of Izayoi. And she has puppy ears! nice :D I really liked this chapter especially because you made InuYasha, the newmade daddy, be so unsure about the whole thing. Smart move to put Rin up there to tell him what to do. After that bit of info he was really sweet and supporting I'm going to find me a husband who will be just as sweet as Inu was! Now the new mommy and daddy and Izayoi can get some well deserved rest. Can't wait to see
how this will end and to see how she will be as she grows up. Seriously I think it will be hilarious if she starts dating as they said. Inu will freak out about it I'm pretty sure about that :P Keep up the good work.

Just one thing, I think I saw a spelling mistake:
You can get all the sleep you want when you’re done, I promise, it should be too much longer now.
I think this should be: it shouldn't be too much longer. the should be makes me feel sorry for Kagome :P
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SOO Kawaii! I like it, I like it! Poor Inuyasha, his ears have got to be ringing. @~@ Beautiful chapter. I love how za little pup has black on her ears. ^_^ can't wait for your next chapter!!!
person Xagzan
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If it's a boy, and Eri just picked out a dress...wonder what IY would think of that.

I think I forgot to review the chapter before this one, the updates seemed pretty fast this time.
person debEdoo
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finally! The baby is coming! Anyways... Can you imagine? Inuyasha cheating on Kagome... what an outlandish idea. How could she even possibly think that he would do such a thing... Dogs are very loyal! It's those damn friends of hers. Even in the TV show, they were pests. I'm still really excited to see how Inuyasha's gonna react in the birthing room. Can't wait!
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice Cliffy. I love them and I hate them. I have been reading this story for a while. I am enjoying the heck out of it. I have seen stories similar to this but I like your plot twists. I wonder if Sesshy is going to give Inuysha a break. I can see Rin getting him to do it though. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
person Anon
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great update... lots of emotion and drama... but the baby is coming... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you...
person Anon
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great update... glad that inuyasha cleared everything up with kagome first... really sweet... and now they have a baby girl... good thing kagome's mom and rin were there in the hospital... nice to see that seeshoumaru has changed... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you...
person debEdoo
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome... I love how Inuyasha sat behind her during the labor and literally supported her. That's how a man should be, right? Right. I'm happy that the little girl got puppy ears. Personally, that's one of my favorite things about Inuyasha. That, and his eyes. Good work bringing Inuyasha's baby into the world!
person Anon
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great update - good writing... things are going well... really sweet of inuyasha to be so attentive to kagome... kinda funny how they acted when they were out shopping... and nice that they spent some time with kagome's family... will inuyasha give kagome a human wedding... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you...
person debEdoo
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So I looked up that chapter in the Manga and laughed my frikin ass off. Inuyasha is just too cute in it! And I love the very last frame of the chapter, with Kagome leaning on her bed and Inuyasha in his puppy-fetal-position... it was too much for me to handle. Anyways, about your newest update: perfection. It's a good filler, though I don't know why you would call it that. Every chapter that you put in is crucial to the story line. We get a better sense of who they are and how they are reacting toward one another, now that they are back on intimate terms. I'm excited to find out how you have Inuyasha react to his pup being born. Is he going to be one of those Dad's who run from the room, praying not to pass out? Or is he going to be the in-awe kind of Dad? Either way, I hope Kagome's there with death threats. LOL... I look forward to the upcoming chapters.