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March 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
OMG...another good one
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
While I do have one critsisum, I wanted to say that I really enjoyed reading this one...I was dramatic and at times funny, but not so funny that it made light of the serious topic of the story. I also wanted to say that I'm not great writter and I don't think that I preticularly have any right to critisize anyone else when I KNOW that I'm not that great when I try to write something, but I DO know one thing for sure. When your writing diologue between characters you CAN'T put the diolouge of the two charaters into one paragraph. I saw that a lot in the story...I know that it can seem like there is to many little parahgraphs but really it looks and flows so much better when you seperate the diolouge. A side from that one grammer issue the rest of the story was beautifully done.
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story... really enjoyed reading it... lots of drama and emotion from everyone... good job... great work...
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your story. It's actually the first that I've read on AFF.Net. I think that the ending was appropriate but kinda leaves you hangin'. One-Shot would be perfect. Anyways I just wanted to let you know that I love it.
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful job. I was sad that this was the end. Sequel perhaps????? One can always hope. Thanks for a captivating read.
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story and your knowledge of the characters and how they would react to things are brilliant and right on. I look forward to reading more of this story and your other works. Well done
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, finally got around to hooking my internet back up so I could review.
Nice story, I like the angst and darkness of it, and glad it didn't turn into a rape fiction, I more than likely would have stopped reading if it did. Keep up the good work and I'm looking to future chapters.
Nice story, I like the angst and darkness of it, and glad it didn't turn into a rape fiction, I more than likely would have stopped reading if it did. Keep up the good work and I'm looking to future chapters.
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LIKE IT!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea, I haven't read it yet, I'm currently in the process of printing it out.... Well I was... Oh damn, the printer is unplugged.... Anyways, will review again once I read these chapters.
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DAMN THEM! THEY GOT WHAT THEY DESERVED, DOING THAT TO KAGOME! THOSE BASTARDS!
OH! And by the way, would you add some more chapters please?
OH! And by the way, would you add some more chapters please?