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love this story!!! can't wait to read the next chapter!! keep up the good work!!!!!

The story is great, although your boyfriend needs to learn how to use punctuation. That little problem does seem to distract from the gist of the story. However- I do love this story. Having Sesshomaru seme and pregnant is quite a feat! Keep it up and I hope your finger gets better soon! DLS

it said i already review on the other site. i don't think so but any way.
you have to love those man sometime they do come in handy.. lol lol hope the finger feels better soon.
what about the rope???? that is killing me...

Hi! Nice story you have here, the sex is really hot and the plot is so cute and I love the romance between the brothers.
You do have a lot of spelligerrors in the story and sometimes things just doesn't sound right like in chapter 21 when Kouga uses Jesus Christ for example, but that is easely fixed with a simple spellcheck and maybe a betareader.
Besides that I have nothing to complain about, you have a great imagination and I hope to read more from you soon.
Thanks for writing and sharing it here on AFF.

Interesting chapter. I an curious as to why Koga didn't notice that Kagome was turned on, after all he has such keen senses and he, himself, stated he hadn't mated yet. And doesn't her love Kagome, or lust after her?

Love it! Update soon please!