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for The Syndrome

by SunsetMiko

person Sharae
schedule January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAY... new chapter!!!!!
person Zalika
schedule January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you!!!!!!! Months!! Months!! Months!! You are driving me nuts with this story. Love the new chapters by the way... Sesshomaru is absolutely goofy at the end, which makes the serious chapter rather relaxing...but I'm going to have to wait another long months before any sort of update, aren't I? You don't have to say it. I know. *sigh* But at least I know it will be worth it.
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yeeeeeees!!!!! After months of waiting we finally get a new chapter! Happy dance time!
person HollySue
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sunset,

This was an awesome chapter, I especially liked the ending : ) I know you a very busy woman and yet you still managed to produce a great chapter. Can't wait for the next one, well actually I can wait lol. Take care you yourself and those precious kids!

Holly
person puppydog
schedule January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You updated! Yey! A new chapter! Whooo! I love this story and I hope you continue it. :)
schedule January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YES! Finally a new chapter! I was afraid you weren't going to do anymore with this! Kagome is so much more patient then I am, I would have at least suggested he apologize then and there to Inuyasha's mom. (for some reason how to spell her name just left me lol)
person N.N.S.
schedule January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your story! I have read hundreds of fanfictions, and nothing compares to how much I enjoy reading "The Syndrome" :D
I know you say to be patient, that your writing takes time, and I understand. I just want you to know how much I look forward to every new chapter and that it is ALWAYS worth the wait and I will gladly continue to do so.
(and while waiting for chapter 45, I have already re-read the entire story 4 times already >_<)

A question for you though- do you have any favorite authors either here or on other sites? or suggested reads? If you do it would be much appreciated =)

Thank you so much for the wonderful writing, look forward to your updates!
~N.N.S
schedule December 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please upload! there hasnt been anything on here in soooo long!! plz update soon!
person lara5170
schedule November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just foun this story today & started reading it today.I really like this story & I can't stop reading I'm at chapter 23 I really want Kagome & Sessh to get together & this last chapter when Sesh became his beast Inu & Sessh's Dad came to speak to the beast to find out who it was suffering over.When Inu,shippo,miroku & bank were told that they(Sessh & Kag) were indeed Soul Mates usually if Soul Mates don't get together they'll never find happiness or love with another, but for a demon to fight the pull of the one who is his soul mate that's the only cause of 'The Syndrom' & noone that has suffered from it has lived past 4 years & Sesh is already at 4yrs.The Dad told them not to interfere because of your feelings against Sessh & give them a chance cause if they interefere for their own selfish reasons & Sesh does die they'd doom Kagome ,their best friend,the girl & one person they see as an angel & love(none want her as a lover or girlfriend) & want protect, to a life without love & filled with loneliness. While Sessh is basically against time & can die as the other half of the soul mates bond,since he didn't understand or know why he was hurting or know of 'The Syndrome' he only has a limited amount of time to form the bond & get her love back. She can't be told about it because if she mated him out of guilt & not love,but to save his life,the mating wouldn't take.Both Kagome & Sessh admitted to the 4 guys that they felt the pull to each other the 1st time they saw each other & fought it to avoid a problem/fight with either the 2 bros or the 4 guys & kag.Inu got angry/jealous & started a fight with Sessh in his beast form when he can't talk & kag came in saw Inu hurt & shippo's the only one who speaks inu & when Sessh asked him to explain why they fought ship refused & that got me so pissed.
I can't help it I'm a sucker for happy endings
person karen
schedule November 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoy this story. i have it bookmarked and i just love reading it. you have done a wonderful job at keeping readers interested. sometimes it gets a little confusing with the flashbacks but if it is reread then it is easily understandable. you are doing a fantastic job. keep up the great work. i also am a big fan of you other works.