rate_review Reviews

Interesting story. I like the chapters that are dealing with their "present" situation the best. I think you could probably integrate the flashbacks better, because I feel that you would have that skill as a writer (you already do that within the present chapters a little bit). Nice development of plot so far.
Looking forward to reading more.

YAY!! I am so glad you updated!! I'm a little worried about the comment you made before the story about us (the readers) not going to like chapter 49 but I am still a very loyal fan. Just can't wait for some sex too lol!
Holly

YES!!!!! I am the 420th review! Oh yeah - uh huh -- oh oh! I've been a faithful follower of The Syndrome for years now and it has brought me much enjoyment. Thanks Sunset.

I am sending you positive writers energy into the universe to help you write more! *Positive!* brain waves)))) *Positive!*)))))))))

Ok I need you to keep writing I'm drawn in please email
Me when you up date

lol I love this story so far. The whole time I`ve been reading this the new song from 5 FingerDeathPunch has been playing nostop, good thing it's a song I like. It just sreams Sesshoumaru in this stroy. Thank you for posting your stoies for every one to enjoy and love!

Thank you for making Kagome the kinda girl that doesn't just jump into it. Takes it slow. I like that. :) Your one of my favorite authors Sunset, thank you for your brain!

I'm having trouble getting along with this Kagome. She reminds me of a Mary Sue. She's perfect, and without reason. From the start she had three beautiful guys falling at her feet. Sure, she sweet and nice. But she hasn't shown any flaws. And I see very little character development from her. Everyone loves her when they met her, she always gets what she wants, and she doesn't have a single bad thing about her. I used to love this story, but as it went on... I lost my personal interest in it. The ONLY thing that keeps me reading here is Sesshoumaru.

So good to see another chapter up. Excellent work as always. I can't wait to see how the boys and Sessh try to get used to getrting along after this. LOL.

New chapter!! I've been waiting for this! Yaaaay! Can't wait til you are able to write more often, I am ridiculously curious to see what happens next, here and in SWTPF.