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for The Syndrome

by SunsetMiko

person ~ * LaCrYmOsA * ~
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4:

Wow, Sesshy's dreaming of Kags. Hehe. Poor guy can't get a break. I feel bad for Megumi. Now she thinking it was all her fault when in reality it was his own. Well, at least he now knows who the only female able to arouse him is...and Miroku is still a perv!

Great Chapter :-D
person ~ * LaCrYmOsA * ~
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapt 1:

I feel so bad for Kagome. Her roomies sound totally horrible. Glad Kouga got told off...he gets on my nerves sometimes. I can't believe I used to adore him...lol. But anyways, great chapter. I'd like to be put on the mailing list for this story. (If it isn't already complete yet.) :-D
person ~ * LaCrYmOsA * ~
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2:

Awww I know the feeling. First day of school sucks. But Kagome proved to Bankotsu that she was definitely not like the others. It was sweet of her to defend someone she didn't even know yet. And at least she made a really good friend out of the whole ordeal. Great chapter.
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww!! That was so sweet! I was wondering how Inuyasha's confidence had been turned around. It was brilliant to use Kagome's power as the catalyst in altering everyones perception of Inuyasha. That was an awesome chapter. According to past chapters, it looks like the next one will be based on their present day situation. I look forward to seeing what will happen with the doggy Sesshomaru. Thanks for the update!

~Rin
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWW!!!Love it!!Love that you used the same guy who bullied Bank back then was bulling Inuyasha.And when Inuyasha started to fight um ta protect Kagome.Have you ever had that feeling when you see a fight scene in a movie and you see one of the charaters getting punched in the stomach and its like you can just feel their pain and you flich watching it?Well that's how I felt reading it!!And the rest of the chapter made me feel all warm&fluffy inside!!Love this story!!
Love Always^
^Dei Dei
person gryphonwills
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!
person Stas
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Are you doing this to spite me? Where's the doggy sesshy and all that other stuff happening in the present. I get that it's important for you to build your background, but... I wanna know what happens next :'(
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is ,Sesshomaru, you're screwed!!Hope he can win her heart cause I don't want you to DIE!!And I can't wait ta see how Inuyasha become Kagome's(in the flashbacks) and how they met Shippo can't wait!!Love the story!!
Love Always^
^Dei Dei
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome as always.
person Legilmyth
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! THis is getting so good. I can't wait to see where you take it next.
Legilmyth