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for The Syndrome

by SunsetMiko

person Anon
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know it would be soooo much cooler if sess did the thing dogs do like start sniffing her lap to bury his nose curiously up her crotch. HAHAHAHA~
person kmplease
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sesshouramu is one big fluffy dog, love the story please update soon.
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh this is so sad and happy of a chapter I love how you did the talking to each other thing thank-you.
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story! This chapter was sooo....on the edge,I dont know.But its like going 2 steps foward and 1 step back .Getting there but slowly .I like that about it.Write more please!!
Love Always^
^Dei Dei
person gryphonwills
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NICE!
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed this chapter, as always. I look forward to the next chapter.
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg i looovvvveeee this story so much
person Anon
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lolz. I have no life. Lolz. I've been waiting for this story to update, you know. Lolz. Do you know how many chapters are in this story?
person ~ * LaCrYmOsA * ~
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5:

Ooh..Sesshy's pervin Kaggy. The poor guy. He should just tell her something. Take a chance. Must be a huge blow that he's the only one without the priveledge to see her body. Can't believe he actually got punched. Anyhow, great chap!
person ~ * LaCrYmOsA * ~
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3:

Awww I feel really bad for Kagome. Damn, they didn't even have the decency to at least stay out of her bedroom. I don't blame her, I'd want to burn the pillows too if that ever happened to me. Yuck. I'm shocked she hadn't felt the need to replace her pillows everytime she came "home". It's like they're running a whorehouse, lmao.

Hehe...Sesshy's got a crush on her. I feel for him, thinking he can never have her. Something very out of character for our favorite stoic Taiyoukai. I don't mind the ooc. Why be typical & stick to the feudal stuff anyway? It's fanfiction for a reason. Oh I'm ranting...sorry. Great chapter, loving the story so far. :-D