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for The Syndrome

by SunsetMiko

person pauly
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE EVERY CHAPTER, AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE. One question. Could you possibly tell if the end of this story in near? if so, how many chapters are left?
person Molly
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww good story....it sounds like your almost done with the flashbacks. Soo when are you going to start writing about the more intiment relationship between the two...not saying that Ive hate the story because I love it. but Im just curiouse as to when you'll get to the other part? :) Keep up the amazing writing.
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was a great chapter ,I can't wait to read more from you please up date soon.
person Molly
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OHHH I LOVE this chapter!! Write the next one soon I want to know what happens next!!
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the last 2 chapters very much. Knowing the way Sesshomaru's mother treated him brings his character into complete perspective. It was terrible! And it made me understand how he grew up to have such egotistical thoughts of himself. It was really nice to revisit the Halloween dance and Kagome's discovery of her vampires' true identity. Now, if he would just say or do something that would confirm that it wasn't just a dream...

Great chapter and thanks for the read!
~Rin
person Stas
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved chapter 27! Has Inuyasha given up on his romantic feelings for Kags?
person Holly
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Well you are doing such a good job I can't wait for new chapters every time I finish one. I liked this chapter because you gave more insight on how Sesh became the way he is. Are you going to have him remember and tell Kags a little or just let it sit between them? I know this is a sesh and kags story so eventually something will happen, the struggles do make it all worth while. I can't wait to find out what the basement is going to look like, I have it all pictured in my head. lol. Thank you Thank you for a good story so far!
Spaz
person Eskamo
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its different than any other kag/sess story ive read. i couldnt stop reading it til all the chapters were regretably over. lol. PLZ send an email to me when you update. i really want 2 know what happens!!!!!!eskamo919@yahoo.com. im truely a fan. plz stay encourages.
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOHHH......So THATS why Sesshoumaru was always soooo bitchy.Now it all make since to me.Cause I know a person(or demon) can't just be born pissed off at the world and think they are the greatest shit ever made .I always love the way you write your story.You pay attention to background things AND the story at the same time .Im not the biggest fan of flashbacks in stories ,but I like yours they are always good and interesting.In all I just have to say I love this story!
Love Always^
^Dei Dei
person Molly
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man thats just horrible!!! Why would a mother DO that to her son :(. Good writing I cant wait for the next chapter :).