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for The Syndrome

by SunsetMiko

schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww! Poor Kagome! She was just beginning to think he might be a better person. He had to go and ruin it. That was a mean trick he played. He should have been determined to win fair and square. Winning by cheating isn't winning at all. Bad Sesshomaru! I am looking forward to the next chapter. This one should be in the present time. Those are always fun! Although I really like the ones in the past too. Hell, I like the whole damn story! haha! Congrat's on your 1st place win! This story deserves it!
person Wolfdoodler
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I seriously love this story.
Every time i see a new chapter i do a little and dance just stare at the screen.
While is frustrates me that every other chapter is in the past (i just wanna know whats gunna happen next!)I LOVE the idea.
Its a way of letting us know how Kagome came to know everyone without just giving us minor details and little flashbacks.
Its also genius in how we get to see how Sesshomaru struggles with himself and fights off the syndrome.
i absolutely adore this story and all of your other ones.

I do hope you are feeling better so, earlier this year I was sick for 3 months (all because of a pill i was taking, gotta love those rare but serious side effects)so i know how sucky it is to feel miserably sick for a long period of time.
Just remember that rest and naps are your best friends, even during recovery, and don't feel pressured to update your stories on schedule. If people have a problem with that, just ignore them. You're sick and when you're sick looking at bright moving screens for any amount of time can be horrendous.
<3
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm going crazy here...please write more...!!!
person DarkLadyLyra
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Just wanted you to know that I love this story and hope that you continue to write. I have just finished reading Ch22 and read your response about the past chapters. I agree with you that they do add depth into the story and give the characters more substance. And just like you said you are the author and should be the only one who decides how and what to write. I look forward to reading more. I will be adding you to my favorites and really hope to see more of this story and others.

Ja Ne
DarkLadyLyra
person Sharae
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVE the poem. couldn't stop laughing....keep writing and hope you get better soon!
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story...I've never read any Inuyasha Fic like it...its completely intoxicating...
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sorry to hear your sick and don't feel bad, this stomach flu I have just keeps hanging on to me like a bad nightmare. It wouldn't be so bad if I would just throw up and get it over with. This is going on 5 days now of just nausea. Losing 14 dollars an hour of work. Thank-you for up date you know I love reading this story despite the need to run back to the bathroom today I did get through the chapter in an hour. I hope you feel better and keep up the good work you have on this, I really do want to read what you come up with next. Maybe soon these "viruses" will leave us all alone for a time with summer coming on here. Again thank-you for the new chappy.
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The chapter was awesome, but that is nothing new. I am so happy that Kagome has begun to understand and accept the feelings that Sesshomaru has for her. It will be interesting to see how her day at school goes when she discovers that she is being 'tailed'. hehe! I'm really sorry to hear that you are feeling unwell. Don't worry about the stories. Just get yourself well again. We will all be here when you get back. Life happens and sometimes we just have to bend with it. Thanks for the read!

~Rin
person Indigo_miko
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to hear you're sick...and have been sick for awhile. I hope you get a chance to rest and get well, despite the hyper 5-year-old. I'm sure we'll all be patiently waiting for you when you get your health straightened out.
I loved the song use in this chapter and I'm glad to see Kagome finally connected the dots. Poor Sessho, his beast really needs to give him a break. He's spent so much time in doggy form he's gonna be dissoriented when the ground isn't right under his snout.
Oh the variation of Mary Had a Little Lab had me rolling. Four males, in a kitchen, singing a nursery rhyme made up about an Inu-taiyoukai....priceless. *snickers*
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You poor thing. Please take care. I remember having that crap while still in college a few years back. My son and I ended up chilled out in the living room for a whole week watching cartoons. He's a good kid and wanted to help take care of me because he said I would do the same for him. LOL Just take care and listen to the doctor and finish the whole round of antibiotics that you are put on even after you start feeling better.

I will be looking forward to your update.