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for The Syndrome

by SunsetMiko

person Kitty
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know I've already reviewed once, but somehow it got cut short.... um.. what was I saying? (the internet has been down for a few days) Um, basically, this is the absolute best story I've ever read! And this really is the first story I've ever felt the need to review! Please let me know when you update this little slice of heaven! ani.cat.candy@gmail.com
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cool chapter!
Question.
When will Sesshoumaru turn back into ,well,Sesshoumaru?
Other than that love the story.
^Dei
person Yunari
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is possibly the best fan fic i have read in a while. It is hard to find a really good one that holds my interest for this long and you have done so. Thank you for this great story and i hope you continue. ^_^
person Kitty
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O(≧∇≦)O Awesome!!!! Love LOVE This story!!!!!!!!!
八(^□^*) タノム!! <(literally: please do me a favor)
PLEASE update soon!!!!!!!!!!! I have been reading this story almost non-stop (I was up until 3am last night!) and am completely addicted to it! I cannot stop thinking about how it might turn out... \(>o<)/ギャーッ!(GYAAA!!!)

..._〆(・∀・@) This is honestly THE BEST story I have EVER read!!!!
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved the last chappy, poor shessy, he could have done alot of things differently...sigh. It was so simple to go back and tell her who he was. Please update soon your story is so good.
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!! I have been waiting for an update. LOL Loved it like always. So torturous, but definitely great. I can't wait to find out what happens next in present day. I have been keeping my eye out for an update for Manage an Inu
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooops. I didn't realize Alycat was still signed in on my computer. LOL The review that was posted from her was mine. Take care.
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. cant wait for the next one.
~Ruby~
person Li
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
..... I don't think I've ever wanted to strangle a female as much as Sango right about now.... Darn it, she just had to go and be nosy hadn't she? *sigh* I just hope that the guys get out of this alive and well,, hehehehe, please update soon! I love how this is turning out, now I want a Sesshoumaru dog, heheheh... Well, till next chapter, CIAO! Oh, and congratz on making the 1000 reviews on FF.net! though by this time I'm fairly sure there'd be more added by the time you read this ^_^ Luv yah!
person Anon
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Even if everyone hates me now I have to say some things: I read your story because basically I love your writing style. Your English is beautiful, there is not a single flaw I detected. You could easily publish your own original work with that style of yours. That´s a rarity in fanfiction.
The plot is o.k., too, if you are into the whole "beast obsesses over maiden"- thing.
But the characters... Kagome is waaay too perfect. Everyone loves her, every guy drools after her, she is power, innocence and beauty incarnate, the epitome of MarySue. She seems to be no real person, nobody is that flawless. She seems to be the sun and her friends the planets that orbit her. Evem InuYasha and Sesshoumaru´s parents seem to love her even more than their own children. They (InuYasha, Shippou, Miroku, Bankotsu) don´t even seem to be able to exist without her.
And EVERY single other woman (except InuYasha´s mom) is an evil, ugly, sleep around bitch. That takes away a great amount of the quality of this story.
No offense.