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for The Syndrome

by SunsetMiko

person Zalika
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH! MY! GOD! Just tell me how it ends please!
person Nikki
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Im sorry that im just now reviewing, but I read your story months ago and I have been waiting for an update ever since but to no avail. I really really like your story its one of the only modern time ones that i like, so im just trying to say I hope you update soon I cant wait you have good humor and a great story so please update. :)
person Zalika
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are killing me here...
person kirarie
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i LOVE this story! it is so good!! such a cute leading couple! i kinda laughed at myself because even though it would kinda creep me out if someone was keeping an eye on my friend the way sesh does for kagome i would totally think it was cute if it happened to me! =P anyway i just wanted to tell you that i think you're doing such a great job with this. i found that with every chapter i read i wished for there to be a next chapter even before i was done with the one i was currently on. and when i realised i was on the last chapter you had so far and then i looked at the fact that you haven't updated this one since july it made me feel rather sad. you're story is captivating, it keeps the readers attention and it makes the reader (at least it did for me) feel the way the characters are feeling, the dread the boys get when kagome is angry, i too felt this dread although i still couldn't help but laugh at the reactions that came from it. the excitement of the first kiss, the anxiousness of sesh and kagome as they start making their way into couple-hood makes me remember how it first was with me and the love in my own life and this made me enjoy it even more! it would be a shame for you to not keep going with this story, also i'm just being really selfish and trying to guilt you into going further with the story because "I WANNA KNOOOOOW!!!" i say as my face turns red and i stomp my foot. =) the best of luck! ---an admirer
p.s. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE keep writing this story!!!!! PPPPPLLLLEEAAASSSEEEEE!!!!!!!! ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
have you abandoned this story?
person Zalika17
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please! For heaven's sake...update!!! I am going crazy here!!!
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you have to finshs this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Zalika
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Scream, scream, scream... you are KILLING me here
person Jennz
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm waiting and waiting and waiting and still nothing next chapter please or more like next 5 please please please
person MidnightRain
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I'm in love with your story, it's fantastic.
Just wondering when you're going to update... it's been a long time since you last did.

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