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by SunsetMiko

schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now that was awesome...as always! I loved the chase at the end, perfect Sesshomaru demeanor with Kagome. I want to see what happens between the two of them next, but I guess I'll just have to wait until after the next chapter :( Oh, well, gotta pay the price for a great story somehow, but I do like how you have the present and the past interchanging. I'll be waiting until next time.
person chan
schedule June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, I love your story, flashbacks and all! >_< I sure hope you can update soon, I hate cliffhangers! Would adding please help? ^-^
person Tyne Riddick
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your story!
I was heartbroken to get to the point where there were no more chapters to be read.
Please continue... : )

One thing: When are Sesshy and Kagome gonna hook up!!!???
The suspense is killing me although I love the romance...beautiful.
Kagome and the Killing Perfection are the best couple ever!!!
person akinohanun
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i missed this story you hadnt updated it for so long!!! i hope you update mor eof it soon its just to good
person Daveesha
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You're back!

I love the new chapter! Thanks for letting us crawl inside Jak's head for a bit.
person Lady Siruka
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok..WOW!!!! I like just found your story when you updated the other day an I havn't been able to quite reading it..lol i'm exhausted from nonstop reading but it is so awesome..your plot and characterization is just amazing..you have truley made a uniqe story out of all these repetative ones. I can't wait to read more when you update..no rush know your probably busy but please update soon!!!
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You updated! Yes!!!! Still love this story and one of the best I have ever read. I want to find out what happens with Sesshomaru and Kagome, but it looks like I'll have to wait for the next update. I really like how you have each chapter jumping back from the present to the past, but it makes the wait for the present a little more anxious. I have to know if Kagome gets furious with him or not! I'll be waiting...as always :)
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Welll it was wonderful to see another chapter to this wonderful story after so long.
And I have to say the Sesshoumaru is really good at self torture. LOL.
Anyway keeep up the great work, I hope to see more in the future.
Legilmyth
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm a tad confused.

It's mentioned in this chapter quite a few times that she's Banks...

>_<

I thought she was (technically) Sesshomaru's???

>_<

Or am I getting this confused with a different story?
person falien
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh please oh please update soon i want to see more this story is so good please hurry

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