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Please continue writing this!! I've been reading it for two years now and it's been my all time favorite story on all of adultfanfiction.net for just as long. PLEASE PUT ANOTHER CHAPTER UP!! You're killing everyone who's been waiting for it.

come on, u need to upload faster!!! plz? i givez u cookie!

Aaaaaah!!!! I only started reading this story about a week ago and I've been hooked and now I just hit the end of the latest chapter and I wanna cry! Lol.
You really are doing a good job with this, I love the way you are building the story between the characters, and I for one enjoy the flashback chapters, I think it is a very good way to incorporate the history and development of the characters. I really can't wait for the next chapter though. The current growth of the relationship between Sesshy and Kags is kind of enthralling and actually is bringing back a lot of old memories for me.

This was another awesome chapter!!! Can't waite for the next one!!

Another good chapter...I will confess, I do like seeing the past between Kagome and Sesshomaru. It shows just how close Sesshomaru is to her without conflicting with the present day chapters. I can't wait for the next one.

OMG!!!!! I don't like reading alternate pairing stories, but this one is absolutely remarkable! Definately at the top of my list of favorite EVER written fanfic! Please please please please PLEASE write more! I don't know if I can stand it! You are an amazing writer and you should definately continue to do so.

oooo... more....more... soon???

i absolutely LOVE this story i hav read it non-stop (literally) since i found it on this site, you capture each character incredibly and your writing style is so casual like you have your own four guy friends hovering over you XP and i hope you will update soon as i dont think i can stand another minute without being able to click the "next chapter" button XD good luck with everything and i wish the best to you and your newborn :)

You have to keep going,Good so far...not good great I liked it,I kept up during the whole thing.You should put another sex scene in the next chapter or something.

Really cute chapter. I liked how Sesshomaru took the advice of the guys without any issues. It took forever to get, but I am not disappointed with the chapter. Can't wait for the next one...well, the next present chapter.