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for The Syndrome

by SunsetMiko

person LadyRin
schedule January 9, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Write more like this soon please.

schedule April 1, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Amazing story! You're a fantastic author! You really bring the characters to life!

person lara5170
schedule June 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This story was so great, I intentionally made myself wait until today to read the last chapter. I'd noticed a few weeks ago that it had been completed but I've enjoyed reading it so much that I didn't really want it to end. I kind of felt bad that they had to use condoms, I know the story had the whole reality thing going but it actually made me appreciate my age(that's not something that happens often). I feel lucky that for my own personal situation, I didn't have to deal with condoms for my 1st time.
After reading the final chapter I couldn't help myself from wishing there was more. I know this was a very long story and it was a really good one. I know I'll probably reread it because I've never read one of your stories only once. There is just something that felt kind of odd to me, with them not truly getting to be with each other (finally being intimate with each other) until the very last minute of such a long story, I kind of wish there was more because the end felt like a beginning.
person catalina
schedule January 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
oh my god!! that was soo god! i soo laughted at the condom part that i too faled off the bed! damm girl did i told you that you are a genius? and i thank you again for the time you take for updating all the stores and i look forward to it in 2014! and i apologise for being a poor reviewer but know ths,that i have and i will read all your work!thank you babe and keep goin cuz you are doin a very fine work!
person jos
schedule January 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Que puedo decir, otra gran historia:)
schedule December 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
LOVE your story!! can't wait for an update!!!
person lara5170
schedule December 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm dying to find out what happens next.
















schedule November 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I remember starting this story a long time ago and I'm glad that I found it again! Your stories just seem to draw me in. Can't wait to see the next chapter of this!! :)
person LaTisha
schedule November 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story is fantastic. I am loving every minute of it. I would love to be emailed when ever you have a new chapter available. Please, please, please keep up the writing.
person Reviewer
schedule November 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really love the concept of this story. I have to say though, making your readers wait 56+ chapters for a sex scene is rather cruel. You need to throw us more bones. Either in the way of actual sex or more steamy scenes like the dream sequences/oral scenes! Lovely story though! I hope any issues you maybe having in your home life passes quickly because you seem like a wonderful person, and you are a wonderful author! :)