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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
being underlined is different? Ok but a great chapter for a great story thanks for posting
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
just to let you know that you did not change Rin's name in chapter 3!!!
Ok now that i said that i really like the story and the way it is going. keep up the good work!
Ok now that i said that i really like the story and the way it is going. keep up the good work!
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. I didn't think I would like it at first, but I was pleasantly surprised. I will be waiting for the next chapter.
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love it good job on the masterbation scene, that was very life like. I hope you up date soon. Thank-you for taking the time to post it for our enjoyment.
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!!! MORE i so love it please update soon TTFN Marrosa