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i liked what you have so far

i am enjoying this story. it has dark complexities to it that intreage me.

glad to help my dear, one thing i know id that if you force it, it'll never come out the way you want it to. My mini r0o's basically just get me to start something else, and then i'm back to it again when they want to. so yeah i know what you mean! 0o0o and i liked giving Izayoi a real role, most times no one ever does, so i feel kinda happy to be able to. anyway, i cant wait for your new story either I'll be reviewing when see it! yours - r0o

love it. holy cow... cant wait for the fight scene. -grins- are you selling ringside seats??? i want one. chibi ninjas??? ive got the evil plot bunnies and ninja monkeys.. and a saiyajin thats pissed at me.. -glances at her OC- i need to work on my own stories one of these days again. hehe.. please update soon.

well it was darker then normal, forced sex and all. But at the same time it flowed well. i understand when its hard to write, muses are such fickle things. I assure you, my muse for Betrothal is there but lacking. I work little by little every day but not getting anywhere and then i have 5 others stories that i've writen maybe 30 pages for over the last wee between them. i can say that perhaps if you have the time, you should attempt oneshots. i find them fun and nice to be able to get out, and they do rose the muse from time to time. Either way, your dark and pretty story is again, fabulous. I find so often that the darker ones are always well written. They have to be so that it makes sense, and there's usually a lot of thought and detail into them, thats why i love them so. I wonder now what will happen now that the plans been thrown some, and i like their twisted love seemed to be coming together, well done. I do hope your feeling better, get sleep, and remember life first, fics later. :D - r0o

hope your doing well dear, i know i'm so behind on betrothal, lemons kill me. Did you see the lemon on Dance chapter 5? its like forever long. anyway hope to see something soon, wonderful job -r0o

That was sadistic, brutal, unexpected, and yet so well done.

great chapter! it's becoming more and more intense. O.O
I really fear for Kagome now. Will sess open his eyes before he kill her soul totally? Will he be able to see what he had in his hands before crushing it beyond repear? i was on the edge of my seat, anxious of what could happen next! *chewiming my nails, eyes fixed on the words appearing in front of me*

even if it appear cruel, i understand her actions towards miroku, why she make him see and hurt that way. He had to know but why would he learn it in a way less doulourous than her? She wanted him to discover it the same way she had. nobody had protected her heart when she had learn their betrayal, she didn't to protect him, she wanted him to feel like her. That way she would be less alone.
the problem now is that the 'survive' of kagome's heart and soul are in the hands of Sesshomaru...there is nothing more frightening than that!
*sigh* i can't wait to see what will happen next! will kikyo had a role in the destruction of inuyasha too? Hm. Arg i really can't wait. I really really love your story. please please, in the name of my sanity, don't let us wait too long, please update really really soon!!!!
much love,
sweetest angel

you need not fear my lack of review, for what a lovely dark and fantastically beautiful work that is this. I am again amazed at the treachery and deceit and its pleasing and captivating. I find myself wondering if she will be able to catch herself from this fall, or if Sess realizing that sadly he is falling too. Because one cannot get this involved and not feel the repercussions of such movements. ^_^ i adore this, and eagerly await for the next chapter!

as for the list, OMG your so right. though are you on ff . net? i will add you now actually. i'll be updating dance and betrothal asap ^_^ wonderful job with this dark beauty.
-r0o

update soon love it sofar TTFN Marrosa