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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! NEW CHAPPIE!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Happy 21st Birthday!! Wow I feel old. LoL I liked it, keep working on it.
Luv, Patty
Luv, Patty
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting fic. i know english is a really confusing language and you did a pretty good job but you should watch word usage. you have written 'save' when you meant 'safe', 'staid' when you meant 'stayed', 'blanked' when you meant 'blanket', 'flee' when you meant 'flea'. not bad, native english speakers do much worse.
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not bad Sweetie. I'd really like to see you update. It has real potential.
Luv, Patty
Luv, Patty
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well. I like your story so far.
Hey, and I'm German, so I know learning English can be a problem.
But trust me, there are more difficult languages out there. Actually I'm tying to learn Japanese.
Keep up your good work.
Hey, and I'm German, so I know learning English can be a problem.
But trust me, there are more difficult languages out there. Actually I'm tying to learn Japanese.
Keep up your good work.