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for Tumble In The Grass

by Lunarwench

schedule March 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This was yummy and amusing. Fun! Xoxo Robin

person memorietrail
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow I would love to see more.
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes Please write more!
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hot and funny.
person Demitria Miriam
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great fucking job! OMG XD That was totally hot and definitely hilarious! XD I enjoyed every minute of reading that! Thank you!!


-DM
person nchsmi
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a dirty little story! I loved it, write more, B reading U! L8r....
person Aura
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! looll!, i just read this story on Y!Gallery 5 minutes ago!

It's a really hot story! really reallyy hot :D loved it!!
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so funny and hot. I loved it. Great job.
=)
person Gothic Lust
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg. Not only was this extremely kinky but super funny as well. I couldn't stop laughing. You know this one-shot reminded me of something I wanted to write about between the two. I loved it. Keep up the good work.
person Lola
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very sexy :) write more, please!!!