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for Betrothal of the Warrior Hime

by sugar0o

schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter thank-you for posting it. I enjoy reading your story.
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very creative idea, well written, and only a small amount of spelling errors.
Awesome! I honestly was impressed with your ability to create a scene so thoroughly.
Bravo. Kudos, and cookies. You have set amazing ground work for a very passionate love scene, and I can not wait to read another chapter. I can imagine our heroes fighting for dominance and being a bit angry or vindictive. I'm quite sure you'll do a great job and have your own ideas all thought out! Keep up the good work.

M
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love how this story is written. continue to write more chapters. Looking forward to reading them!! ^_^
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
double dose of goodness...i enjoyed that inmensely and I can't wait for the battle now... crushed pride on both sides... hehe update soon *hands a lolipop* you deserve a treat..
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*bangs head into wall crying why?!* I wait and wait ..and this is were you leave it....??!!! *tear* i feel faint.. something so good should not end so...
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, you are ebil but what a cliff hanger omg this is a great story up date soon please please your doing a really good job very creative thank-you for taking the time to post it.
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Once I started reading this I could not stop until I had finished all chapters posted! Please keep gooing, This story is SO good. I love the story line, Kagome ROCKS!!!! I cant wait to find out what happens next.^-^
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow i love your story..i couldnt not stop till i read all the chaps... it's 3 in the morning now but it was worth it.. it eagerly await the next chapter...
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love how you have empowered Kagome! On most fics she is too fragile but this is just perfect I can barely wait for the tug of war that is going to ensue between Sesshomaru & Kags. Keep it up. Update soon please (:
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow i'm loving this and you better finish. i was sad about sota but his death was needed to bring out kagome powers. can't wait for the next chappy

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