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for Betrothal of the Warrior Hime

by sugar0o

person laura
schedule December 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
there needs to be more to this story please tell me there are more chapters to come i am so curious to see what else happens please tell me there are more chapters or at least a sequel to this story.
person lara5170
schedule July 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just read this story & I'm not sure if this was the 1st time I read it. I really enjoyed it but I don't understand the last chapter. The story doesn't seem complete because Raidan never took the pendant off of Kagome like he said he'd do as soon as she was done fighting Sessh. There also wasn't any mention of the ball or what would happen at it. I'm also curious about Naraku's plans & how he had the right to just take over as the new Lord of the North. It would seem that he shouldn't have had the right to do it because it was Kagome (& the West) who basically took out the old Lord (his family). I can't help wondering if it would be up to the 3 remaining Lords to choose who'd take over the North as the new Lord or if it was up to Sessh's dad (or, if Kagome had some say in it?)? I'm very confused about Sessh's mom & Sessh, both being related to Tsukiyomi (the Kami of the Moon) because in this story it mentioned that after Raidan had procreated with immortals, that it was no longer allowed. There are just so many questions I have that my mind is spinning. I was also looking forward to all the females getting together, only to find that they'd all become pregnant & read about their reactions. This was a great story & if it's not complete then I will hope & pray that it will be continued. Thanks for such a great story.
person YunaNeko
schedule March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. Love It. Can't Wait For Next Chapter. UPDATE SOON! GAMBATTE NE:D
person Anon
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*dusts the cob webs of my comp* this is a pleasant surprise on my first day back to the site.. I'm sorry thongs have yet to pan out with your guy but I wish the best..the chap was enticingly good as always
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NO! i read it all... dam i hate reading it all because there is nothing more to read of it yet. Anyways it was a great story, I like how you made Kagome powerful and headstrong. Keep on writing and update soon, I need more good story to read!!!!
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! Alsome Chapter!!! It was worth the wait!
person Noacat
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just a quick FYI. In your description you spelled heroine wrong. Heroin is a drug. Heroine is a female hero. Thought you ought to know!
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*bouncebounce* write more!!! please please please! (No, i promise i'm not on a sugar high, just excited you updated)