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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. It was kind of cute. The spelling and the grammar really need to be looked at. Simple corrections like capitalizing everyone's name would help clean it up a bit. Just another thing, I'm not sure if you meant to say it, but you said Kagome had chestnut hair. That's a dark red color, not black. Just pointing that out in case you didn't mean it.
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April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please try please very good
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG that was kool LOL no oneshot MORE TTFN Marrosa
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THE SONG GIRLFRIEND! IT'S MY FAVE! I LOVE HOW THE STORY REVOLVES AROUND IT AND YOU SHOULD UPDATE!!!!!
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?