rate_review Reviews

Very nice, I like the idea, and by having it so scatered, it makes it really seem like his thoughts. Bravo~! :3

i don't lnow if sesshoumaru was so ooc. he's a youkai of few words, after all. we never really have a chance to know his thoughts. these thoughts seemed to fit the intensity he always projects, though.

i think the intensity of this story is what i liked most about it. i love a story that makes me feel, no matter what it makes me feel.

only someone who has examined their own emotions closely could portray so much with only going into one person's thoughts. i really liked this. thank you

That was so hot. I loved it, it so very poetic, too.
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I don't really think Sesshomaru is that OOC. Actually, it seems to me that you depicted him exactly as he would be if he really did mate with InuYasha, like we all knew he would eventually!

A nice take on Sesshoumaru's POV. And yeah, a little OOC, but at the same time, the entire thing came across kind of like a moment in time, when they've obviously done things to each other and become something to each other that they weren't in the anime...so OOC is fine. It made it interesting. I especially like the little bit where Sesshoumaru talks about control and keeping himself from ripping Inuyasha open. Gory sounding, but at the same time, could so completely see him evolving like that.

That was good, once you start reading this you can't stop. Hope to see some more of your stories

i liked it. now you need to do inu point of view..

This chapter was so exciting! You must write more and soon, PLEASE!!!! Keep me posted nchsmi8@aol.com~ B reading U!