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for Three Months *Complete*

by cukid9

person Melissa
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is like being so close to having an orgasm, then suddenly being pulled back from the brink. Maddening, silly but still addicting. I love the clever mix of humor, sexual tension and descriptiveness. Keep it up!
person Kimiko
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh.My.GOD! That was so hot! (>.<) (lol sry, please bare with this perverted self) i was actually relieved that Kagome wasnt made fun of or embarressed. glad that Inu feels the same as kagome does. please update soon...and hopefully with a lemon too! (^^)

Kimiko =D
person Audralla
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow great story please keep it up
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol I actually tried looking for it too :( but I couldnt find it.... siiigh. oh well, but I loved this update! I wish she hadnt gotten all weird though but I would have probably done the same thing in her shoes ;)
person Lynn
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely lovely!!!!!! You must write that next chapter soon!
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry the cliffhanger was well worth it!
I love it. Hearing Inuyasha's side of the story is great too.
And you couldn't have planned it any better using that cliffhanger to start Inuyasha's somewhat point of view.
I love it! Definitely can't wait for the next chapter, see how this unfolds. =]
See you next update.
person Ashley
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is so well written.

It's hot. :) Seriously.

I started giggling madly when I saw that you updated.

You made my day. Haha.

Update soon, please. :)
person Lord Roushijin
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You are an amazing writer! Absolutely perfect! XD This story just draws you in and keeps you there! It's great and steamy and never stops! I'm just head over heels right now for this story! Keep up the amazing work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person LadyCash
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You absolutely will NOT, under any circumstances, go into any cave, anywhere, and not write this fic.
You will, instead, do your utmost to continue to gift us with this supremely funny, poignant, and steamy
story every chance you get. Understood?
Do not make this LadyCash repeat herself. The consequences will be dire.

Now, my review.
Love this chapter, where IY makes a move. Bold fellow ain't he? But I kinda like him that way.
Too bad K reneged on the shower sharing deal, it looked for a moment there like we had a lemon!
But, this just means the tension and lust will rise. By the time they do get together, it'll be
volcanic, I bet!
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was good. I was holding my breath at the end of this. I would love to see this be continued. I can just picture what is going to happen next... and there are some hilarious possibilities.