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by cukid9

schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great! Whew, i was definitely waiting for the last chapter. And boy am I well satisfied. Great story overall! Not only was it entertaining, it was actually well written too! Bonus points! I loved it. =)
person Lynn
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I quote:

"But it had been worth it.

Well worth it."

This was a nice and hot lemon. I loved it :D
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHoooooo!!!! Shmexy!!!!!! I loved this story, great job! And your message was TOO freaking funny, lol! Tsk, tsk, Shame on Inuyasha and Kagome! Lol, hope you write more good stories soon!!!!
person Patty530
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story. So what if it's PWP or as I've "heard" it called PIP. (Porn Is Plot). It's a wonderfully written, beautifully timed, smile inducing piece. Loved it.

Patty
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
UUGH youre killing me lol I really cant wait to see what happens!
person WTW
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was really cute! I like the way you split up the chapters to be from one point of veiw to the other. Nice.

I like your form of detial as well. I sure would love to see what happens next.

lol, I'm being honest when I say that I'm glad things didn't work out exactly as Inuyasha had planned when he came in to the bathroom. Way to go Kags for her sweet reaction there. I probably would have done the same. ^^

Hope to see a chapter up again soon but take your time. No rush.
person angel
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please add more chapters! This story is great it has a lot of humor underlying the sexual aspect of it. I love how you have both characters in the modern world it is a nice change to read this types of stories. I hope you update soon I really cannot wait to read the next chapter. Update update update.
person weyrdkat
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. . . you've got a great start to a really interesting plot going on here. . .You've got great grammar and language too. . .
I can't wait for the next chapter!!
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damned hilarious! brilliant too!
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
FREAKING A!!!!! I LOVE it! Woot! Loving it even more! I LOVE your style of writing, it's so cool, lol. Please update soon!!!!!!!!!! Pweeze?

*~Sho-Chan~*