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March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
MA!!! Its totally not fair to though french words around like ;), I was getting all into it and then there it is all french and not one of the ones I forgot from highschool french I had to stop and look it up...Jeeze make me learn something when I'm trying to get into some good smut :P...Ok joking aside this was great, now I'll have to read your other posted stories too so off I go orreevwoar (lol)
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG... You have one awesome mind...
To be honest, it's really hard to find a story where a writer can describe a lemon and not make it seem really slutty and waaay to pornographic.
But, Wow, you made it fun, sexy, and just completely amazing.
I'm not sure if this was the end, but if it is then, you, my friend have one hell of a perfect story! If it's not then I can't wait for an update!
To be honest, it's really hard to find a story where a writer can describe a lemon and not make it seem really slutty and waaay to pornographic.
But, Wow, you made it fun, sexy, and just completely amazing.
I'm not sure if this was the end, but if it is then, you, my friend have one hell of a perfect story! If it's not then I can't wait for an update!
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THAT STORY IS TOTALLY ADORABLE! Man I hope there's a sequel... havent checked out your authors page yet, but I really have to. SO CUTE!
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I sure did love chapter 2 and even 3. Hilarious and sweet. Good job and great short AU story. I hope you continue to write.
Take care!
Take care!
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A job well done!!! Thank you for completing your work. I do hope to see you able to create some other stories to share with us here. It be an honor to read anything you have come up with again.
Thank you agian for working so very hard on this fic.
Thank you agian for working so very hard on this fic.
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are an awesome author! Your writing so so well done and compelling and I REALLY loved this story! short, sweet, and sexy... all good adjectives for me. Anyway, the way you write makes me want to read the entire thing, instead of skipping over boring or non important parts. You made this story very fun and entertaining in a subtle way... which I find awesome! Well I could go on, but I'm sure you're busy writing. (or atleast you should be! :P ) Thanks for the story! Can't wait to read more!! ~ inuslilmiko ~
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say...you did it again. Wonderful story and I loved how you built it up for the climax at the end. I look forward to your next story.
Chanda
Chanda
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your little piece of life between our two favorite characters was very pleasant to read. There are a lot of "first time" on AFF, but yours was refreshing in a way, and subtle. Thank you very much. Go on ...
A french mother and reader,
Bonjour de la France
Merely Truth
A french mother and reader,
Bonjour de la France
Merely Truth
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i don't know if it's hot in here because i'm blushing so much or because... well, i know it's not the furnace, it's set for 65. :o
you are good. this story is very well written. i enjoyed it very much and will look for more of your work.
janer
you are good. this story is very well written. i enjoyed it very much and will look for more of your work.
janer
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, made me laugh a few times throughout the story, and hell, even got me a little 'hot' so to speak. And not many stories do that for me nowadays.