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for A Christmas Wish

by cindygirl

person JenLazar
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very beautiful poignant. Out of the mouths of babes comes such love and wisdom. I also believe this needs no more to it. You did an excellent job from beginning to end. This is a fic to be proud of. It's not overdone and the mating was tender and sweet. She didn't know she was fertile but a dog's nose is never wrong. Now can you imagine what that must feel like to have your mate knotted up inside you until they are sure of conception? Hmmm, anyway, a great job well done. Jen
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. It had a great plot and your writing was spectacular.
I think you should do a mini sequel that involves Inuyasha's reaction to the news and maybe have the Tamas reappear and turn their child into a full demon instead of half.
This was the best christmas gift. Great story.
person Jadziane
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks, was a beautiful story to read on this first January 2008 ...
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww...I loved this story! Sometimes the oneshots are the best. ^.^