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for A Christmas Wish

by cindygirl

person Sesshoukoibito
schedule January 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Thank you!! It's a very really good story you have.. This is the best fanfic I read about sesshoumaru and kagome..
May your Christmas full with jou and laughter
person lara5170
schedule May 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story but the only thing I didn't understand was how Kagome had been hurt so bad by the injured wolf. When the 4 souls had said they wanted to live & had chosen Kagome's body as the vessel for themselves, they said they'd protect her. While they went to the trouble of making her an immortal being, then why wouldn't they give her (immortal) body the ability to heal itself? The other immortal beings, like Sessh & the other youkai (such as, the elder wolf youkai who didn't have the ability to take on a humanoid form & even Inuyasha, a hanyou- as a hanyou I don't think he's immortal since he is the product of an immortal & a mortal) have the ability to heal rather quickly without the help of herbs or bandages, so it seems a bit odd that Kagome as an immortal wouldn't have that healing ability (instead of healing, she just continued to bleed until she lost consciousness).
person lara5170
schedule May 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I was in the mood to read something I knew I'd enjoy so I've been rereading some of your stories. I'm not sure if I've read this before
person lara5170
schedule November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was another great story
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. I think it is great that Sesshomaru will do anything for Rin when she makes her wish. I love how you made kagome. She just wants to be loved.
Highland0heart
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
uuuuuuummmmmwhat happened to shippo???
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy for them
person Anon
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! I for one vote for an epilogue, perhaps where we get to meet the new pup…. In any case this was truly a great story thank you for letting us enjoy it !
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this story. Stayed up an extra two hours just to finish it. I really liked the way you set the stage, how you dealt with the battle and the jewel and how Kagome had changed. The Christmas wish part was adorable. It was perfect, the magic of Christmas made everyone happy in the end. Liked the lemon too.