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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
STILL love this story, even the third time I read it! I WISH a hot guy would just jump into my room and *squeals~~~* I'm such a perv! Lol. Love your stories very much!!!!!
~Sho-Chan~
~Sho-Chan~
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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hiya again! Still loving the story and Sesshomaru's lines are pretty funny. Especially "Because she's starting to bitch. A lot. AT ME." lmao. That really made me laugh. Thanks for the review on my fic as well and don't worry, I still can't get the email thing working myself. Oh, fancy Restuarant in Chicago: "The Maison On Fifth". You need to make reservations like a month in advance for like three months later or something and it's like one of those resturants Donald Trump would go to, lol. Anyway, keep it up. I really like it!
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY LIKED IT YEAH... IT WAS.. INTERESTING... BUT .. WELL.. YOU MADE KAGOME LOOK LIKE A SLUT..BUT ANY WAY... I LIKED IT
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmmm... i like your story very good update soon
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can I just say ONE thing?
I'm TOTALLY hooked on this story!!!! Way to go, I really like it! And GODDAMN this is really good! I mean REALLY REALLY good! I've never read a fanfic where Inuyasha just happened to proclaim Kagome as his girlfriend after going into her room and they did naughty stuff, lol. Man, I like it. It's definitely original! I give it two thumbs up! Lemme know when you update, okay? Much love!
~Sho-Chan~
I'm TOTALLY hooked on this story!!!! Way to go, I really like it! And GODDAMN this is really good! I mean REALLY REALLY good! I've never read a fanfic where Inuyasha just happened to proclaim Kagome as his girlfriend after going into her room and they did naughty stuff, lol. Man, I like it. It's definitely original! I give it two thumbs up! Lemme know when you update, okay? Much love!
~Sho-Chan~
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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad start.
I like the style, and the pacing is good.
But a ? I am assuming that K lives on the Higurashi shrine, as you
stated her mom and gpa were shrine keepers. Yet her 'neighbor' is close
enough not only to see, but to talk between windows, and climb from one
to another. Sounds more like an apartment building (s), and very, very
close ones at that. At that near a distance, what's the point in windows,
there couldn't be much light available.
Sorry if I misunderstood, but the neighbor/window thing doesn't mesh, it
nags me throughout the reading. Might want to clear that up, somehow.
Also, if this is continued, would love to see the 'instant attraction'
thing expanded more. Was it destiny? Are they soul bound? Or was it just
spur of the moment lust? Again, good style, not at all juvenile, just a
few ? that came up.
I like the style, and the pacing is good.
But a ? I am assuming that K lives on the Higurashi shrine, as you
stated her mom and gpa were shrine keepers. Yet her 'neighbor' is close
enough not only to see, but to talk between windows, and climb from one
to another. Sounds more like an apartment building (s), and very, very
close ones at that. At that near a distance, what's the point in windows,
there couldn't be much light available.
Sorry if I misunderstood, but the neighbor/window thing doesn't mesh, it
nags me throughout the reading. Might want to clear that up, somehow.
Also, if this is continued, would love to see the 'instant attraction'
thing expanded more. Was it destiny? Are they soul bound? Or was it just
spur of the moment lust? Again, good style, not at all juvenile, just a
few ? that came up.