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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Your summary definitely got my attention. I hope Sesshomaru can go back and change history.
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well written and interesting plot set. Look forward to learn if they will act in the modern era or go back in time to change the faith of the demons.
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So, yeah as a one shot i think i would have wanted more, as you have 2 chapters now and both are VERY enticing, i want more. chop chop writer! update! ^_^
this is a lovely story, though i'm a big Sess fan, i know he'd be cold and want to conquer the world but i think he'd be a tad bit concerned abotu other demons, if he was the last no matter what he wanted to do, his pup would be a hanyou... unless as an author your planning to make Kags and all powerful miko a demon baby machine ^_^... i dunno either way i love it, and i hope you update soon. its lovely, as a first its fantastic. - r0o
this is a lovely story, though i'm a big Sess fan, i know he'd be cold and want to conquer the world but i think he'd be a tad bit concerned abotu other demons, if he was the last no matter what he wanted to do, his pup would be a hanyou... unless as an author your planning to make Kags and all powerful miko a demon baby machine ^_^... i dunno either way i love it, and i hope you update soon. its lovely, as a first its fantastic. - r0o
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December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So far this has a very solid beginning. There were no grammar or spelling problems that I saw. This has the makings of a great story, saga, or adventure, however you wish to phrase it. It is going to be great if you stick with it.
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December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you said that it was going to be a one shot does that mean that it is going to be a short fic? If all Demons were wiped out how does Sesshoumaru save everyone? Hm... Questions to ponder... *holds Head* my brain hurts... Well post again soon so that i can read and reveiw i think that it is to early to be giving idea's the plot is not fully lain out yet!