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Kagome is certaintly interesting when her family is threatened. And Sesshoumaru laughed at her antics that was great.

Great chapter. I feel sorry for Kagome. I think she would have felt more for her friend, felt more of the betrayal than she showed. But then again, after learning what Kagome learned, Maybe not. I am looking forward to you next chapter.

I like it. its cute and funny!!! more!!!

Well that's interesting. I'll bookmark this story and await for your updates. I'm so glad you check you grammer. I hate having to translate what I read because of poor grammer. Good job.

Just a word...Wow *grin* Really good chapter!
I almost cry at the part where he said that she will be alone all her life since no man would want her. That was really well writen. I had really suffered with her at this part and I was almost where I would have jumped in and throw the glass of water at his face too! ;)
Really good chapter indeed and I can't wait to read more. Please please update soon!!!!

Awesome chapter. You have a great habit of leaving cliffies. I thought that when Naraku wished away demons, he got rid of Hanyous as well. Is Naraku still a Hanyou or is he just a really powerful human?

I think your story is well thought out and very well written. I can't wait to see the next chapter so update asap!

hmm i really like this story thus far but i am left a tad bit confused in this chapter, that was an incarnate? or the real Naraku, b/c the jewel in chapter 2, sis leave him a demon, just a weak demon. That being said, as far as time goes, wouldn't it be about 50 or so years after Kags was born that any of her friends/enemy's became incarnates, if the rule applied that you had to wait 500 years to be reborn... another thing, if Kags and Sess, were in that guys house and he was completely murdered along with his wife, wouldn't their finger prints be all over everything! a fire should have started in the house to cover their tracks, unless this was all part of your plan for the overall story.

It has been a long time for me to come back to fanfiction and this is the first story I read in months. I must say this plot line is new and refreshing. I look forward to reading more.

I enjoyed this chapter as much as I enjoyed the first. This is a great story so far.