rate_review Reviews

I would like to read more from this story. I enjoyed it thoroughly. Maybe a lemon? ;)

Mmm, I liked it. I don't usually get off on erotic fanfiction, but this really did me in. Job well done.

And you say you like taking requests, no? Well, if you're still feeling up to it, I do have a request that definitely suits your writing ability. It's actually a pretty tedious challenge for any writer. I'm thinking it would be pretty angsty, and nearly impossible for Kagome to be in character. Something that involves Kagome having to cheat on Inuyasha--not that she wants to, but she HAS to. And at some point she whimpers something along the lines of, "I'm sorry Inuyasha...but I had to...". Hmmm, and you decide how Inuyasha handles it. Seeing as how your one-shots tend to be pretty lengthy, I think it could be done. If you can do it, thank you so much, that'd be awesome. If not, I'd totally understand.

Wow. That was hot. You did a great. It's usually hard for me to read lemons without feeling grossed out by word usage or something, so I appreciate how well that was written. You said that you would also like ideas for one-shots. Well, I don't know if you've seen the movie 'Backdraft', but there's a scene where this couple does it in the hose bed of one of the fire trucks. Classic firefighters fantasy. Lol. I was woundering if you might want to experiment throwing a one-shot together involving Inuyasha and Kagome. In modern day with either one being a firefighter, or both, you never know. Maybe not necissarally in the hose bed, but in a similar situation. I've just always wondered how interesting that would be, but deffinatly too terrified to try. My cheif would skin our asses raw. Lol. Just something to think about if you would like to give it a shot. Good luck with future stories!

hey i loved this story - i wish you would do one more part to it though - like inuyasha goes and gets kagome's name tattooed on his pec above his heart and then more lemon/lime ensues - just an idea i had.

That was original. Great Story. Had me glued.

now i like this claiming

I loved BOTH of your fics. They were absolutely amazing. I was wondering... do you only do Inu/Kagome? I'd LOVE to see you do a Kouga/Ayame if you would be up to it. n.n

Awesome story...this would be fantastic in a few chapters, kind of leading onto inuyasha telling Kagome that he loves her

Mhmm! Yup yup. This is what you call really great detail in a story. That's right.
I have all ways enjoyed any author who has been able to capture this kind of realistic detail in their wrighting. Thank you for sharing your skill and creativness with us. It's an honor to read your plot here.

I do hope that you will continue to grace your readers with some more please. ^^

Thank you again!!! Keep up the wonderful work!!!

Hehe, I FINALLY Got around to reading it. I loved every second of it, it was so sweet. Keep up the good work, and if you ever need a beta reader I'm here. :: Grins ::