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for Wet Wings

by PinkPleasure

person marcia
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well that was interesting. What I'm wondering is if he ment to take her as his mate or just got caught up in the moment. Cruel trick to do to her though about the festivel.
person Ivy
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!!! Update, please? I like Kagome as being portrayed as not such a good girl. The intimate moments are so well-written, but your story has a really intriguing plot, too! So update soon!!! I can't wait to see what happens next :-)
person Lola
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. Its one of the best Sess/Kags! I can't wait to see how the relationship changes now that Kagome is his mate. Will the fates or Inuyasha make another appearance? Will Kagome have his heir? I have a ton more questions, but I'll wait and see where you decide to take it when you update :) Which I hope will be soon!
person bloodred rose
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story has left me wanting more. it is a very powerful read.
person Ivy
schedule December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think your story is very well-written! It has such an interesting premise... hopefully you update soon!
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I really like this story. This is the
first story in a long time I've really
enjoyed! It's well written and the story! Well,
the story is amazing. Please post another
chapter soon! I'm excited I found Wet Wings!
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is a great story I hope please I hope you update soon. Thank-you for writing and posting it for our enjoyment.
person L0VER
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS. but maybe its just a different kind of story. but i dont get the last chapter? what the was the whole humilating scene thing? :S, and i like how the submissive kagome got kind of jealous :p, and i would like to see the daytime kagome fight more than just give in to sex. yu know what i mean ? maybe have her be dominant ... (in a sexy way if you want) but all in all. great job!
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great job! It's really interesting, I can't wait to see what happens next.
person Anon
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?