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for For Forever My Lord, For Eternity My Love

by Ahya

schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm hooked. I just hope what comes around goes around (karma does suck)

~zen
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like a mean Sessh, but holy crap he is the biggest bastard ever in this story. And yet somehow I am hooked (I don't know what that says about me, but I'm sure it's not good.)

Keep the chapters coming. I am oddly fasinated by the whole "pet" thing. It's like a train wreck where I just can't look away.
person L0VER
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg, sesso fuckin that servant pissed me off.. is this a dark fic? is there gonna be a happy ending .. please state in the next chapter
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am wondering what the past is between these two. I am also curious to see if the problems between these two will be resolved. Sesshomaru has to at least care that he is causing her depression. Usually "Masters" don't work to make beat their "pets" into nothingness unless they intend to build them back up to be even better.

Please update soon! I really want to know what you are going to do with the set up here. There are so many possibilities. How does he deal with himself for doing this to her when the questions are quite deserved? We already knows that he hates this being done in the first place.
person L0VER
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love the plot and the way the story is forming. but im still kind of confused... :S eh, ohwell. everything will work out, right?
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your story. I like a mean Sessh, but you have really made him quite the bastard. Will we get to find out why he changed from loving her to keeping her as a pet?
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why was Sesshomaru treating her like he was in the first place? That was an interesting look into the BDSM lifestyle though. I am curious as to what this is leading up to. LOL It is really good though.
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dont leave me hang. please more it so good
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW i so want to read more of this please keep up the good work and please update soon TTFN Marrosa
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooo, I'm really enjoying this story...can't wait to see more!