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for For Forever My Lord, For Eternity My Love

by Ahya

person L0VER
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
honesty, i hate how sesshomaru's acting. UGH! i hate it i hate it i hate it! so... UGH!. he kills their child and now he's being all lovely dovey?! despicable. i would never tolerate it. and i also dont like how weak kagome is. GRR! THEY DESERVE EACHOTHER. and no,im not hating. in fact, i love the story . its just the characters are so fusterating. ahah, update soon!
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am glad they are on speaking terms. I just hope it doesn't turn sour and Kagome finds herself battered and bruised. Please update as soon as you can.
person sendosha
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I´ve read all chapters at once and still don´t get where you´re going with this story. The actions are a bit different but still the same; Sesshoumaru is nice sometimes then he gets abusive. And Kagome is still the pathetic and spineless woman from the first chapter. I have children myself and if anyone would hurt them they would pay bitterly, no excuses.
person L0VER
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woooooooow, im..surprised. im still a little SKEPTICAL of sesshomaru, what does he have up his sleeves. but still.. theres still a part in me , the I AM A WOMEN , I HAVE RIGHTS part, im disappointed that kagome can forgive him that easily .. well, at least seem to begin to. no matter how much she loves him, its her CHILD he PURPOSELY killed. have to stand your ground ya know .. :\ she is a women after all.. giving birth is always like a dream come true. UPDATE SOON
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you feel better. Getting sick sucks!!! Duh, I know. LOL Well, I enjoyed the chapter. The relationship is changing gradually, but I feel that a big explosion (or implosion...) will probably be happening and soon.
person yeiko87
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great so far! keep writing!
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
T.T poor Kagome...
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope Kagome runs a way, Sesshoumaru is acting like an ass and he killed their child. Kagome is better than that, poor thing, she needs to get even, but how do you get even with some one who kills your baby?
GREAT STORY! IT IS ONE OF THE BEST! I LOOK SO FORWARD TO YOUR UPDATES!
person L0VER
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohmygosh!!!!! right when it seems as though everythings progressing, the chapter ends!! IM GONNA GO CRAZY! update soooooonsooonsooonsoonsooon!! x)
person Anon
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey i love the story its got a real feel to it and i would like it if you would keep going