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for For Forever My Lord, For Eternity My Love

by Ahya

person 88pieces
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg I almost cried when Sesshoumaru's beast said their mate was sad and at the end of the chapter when Kags got her heart broken. Oh my gosh it was so good.
person inu_yokai
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! i'm speechless at the turn this fic has taken. it's a welcoming turn though. i've waited for the update of this fic and i wasn't disappointed in the least! there are many things that i would like to compliment you on. first, i'm glad the direction Kagome's character is taking. she's finally getting a backbone and understands that there is so much she can forgive before realizing that it's not going to make a difference. she never gave up on him in hopes that he will come to his senses but his inner turmoil has clouded their relationship with uncertainty. second, i'm completely frustrated with sesshoumaru and i applaud you in this accomplishment! you really captivate the coldness that he's known to embody so well that it becomes frustrating. all you want to do is reach into the monitor and choke him until he comes to his senses! haha
but i think you captivate their flaws very well and use their best known characteristics as said flaws...a very smart move on your part.
i can't wait for the update and future twists!
person Lillian9
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to agree with the reviewer before me. While the fic is quite exciting I´m not sure if I like it. I don´t think it´s very realistic either. Just imagine that this happens to yourself: if your own boyfriend hits you till you lose your child. Would you love him still? If a guy did this to me I would want to kill him.
And here she is all lovey dovey with him, even if he still slaps her. No sane woman would stay voluntarily with an ass like this, not even if he looks like Sesshoumaru.
person snowbird
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just discovered this story and I have to say it is very different. To be honest I'm not sure I even like it but it intrigues me enough to want to know how it ends. I'm completely puzzled by his Dr Jekyl/Mr Hyde personality that he took on when he became a Lord. Why should becoming a Lord do that to him? I know that certain brain tumors can cause a personality change. Did he hit his head or something? I'm just trying to understand since you've not offered any explanation. I just know that he's horrible and needs some form of anger management. I have no sympathy for Kagome since she still wants to love and hold on to him after all that he's done to her. Maybe she has a mental pain fetish. I'm a very loving and forgiving person myself, but if a man did to me what he's done to her, no way in hell would I still love him or want to stay with him. I'm just not into spousal abuse whether it be verbal, mental, or physical. I saw it from my dad against my mother when I was a child until she finally divorced his ass. So it makes me angry to even read about it being done to someone in a story. Anyway, I'm curious to see if you have plans to straighten out these two and try to explain why Sesshoumaru had such a personality change. Is he now going to beat up on her and blame her because his beast marked her?
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is truely one of my favorite stories to read. I look so forward to your updates!
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Again, another good chapter I love how you made Kagome talk back to him. Hope you update soon
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating I like this story a lot finally you have Kagome being strong. Thanks for the slight change in her.
person L0VER
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OKAY, this chapter made up for my other rants x-). maybe im just in a good mood. BUT OHWELL, i love it. drama is starting ..well.... plot is forming .. WHATEVER, "I" get what i mean . but yeah, update soon . one of my fav stories!
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So tragic. Sesshomaru needs to get off his high horse and admit to her once again that he loves her. I mean it is so painfully obvious. What good does he think he is doing for either of them?

Its a very beautiful and yet tragic story. I will be waiting patiently for the next update.
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, he seems so evil at times. LOL And, she needs to reflect on her feelings and actions. Great chapter! I am glad to hear that you are feeling better. I was missing almost half of my students from the flu this pass two weeks. These colds are getting bad.

Can't wait for the next chapter. I look forward to it. Take care and drink/eat plenty of vitamin c! LOL