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NOO THAT CAN NO BE THE END...DID SESSHOMARU SAY I LOVE YOU??? AHHHH good story for the most part.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

OMG I love this story!!! Great work! I hope you update soon!!! ^_^

I loved this story but I must say I didn't get the ending.....it was very sudden and didn't seem to actually end. Are you writing a sequel to this or is this it?

OUTSTANDING!!

WOW< am i missing something? am i that behind that all i remember is stopping at ch 15.. and now its complete?! :\ it'll get back to me sooner or later......hm.. now i just have to start from ch15. ahah, but YAY. congrats on a great story! I hope you start another one soon.

It's about time she got a set of 'balls'! Now let's just see if she sticks to her decision. I still don't like her though, because this decision was not made when he murdered their child. Her desiring to be with him after that turned me totally against her. You've still not offered an explanation for his Dr Jekyl/Mr Hyde personality that he took on when he became a Lord. By her rejecting her position as Lady and mate, does that mean his new mistress automatically has his mark now? I hope so. He deserves anything and everything bad to happen to him. He needs to be brought to his knees eating humble pie made of razor blades. Sorry if I'm hard on him, but you made me hate him when you had him deliberately beat her up in order to make her miscarry. That's when I would have left.

good for her! sess needs a rude awakening! i hate how hes so mean to her! i feel like theres going to be no way for him to redeem himself because so many of his past actions are so cruel.

WOW. the chapter had everything I was thinking about + was going to say in this review. okay so, first when I started reading this chapter, i all of a sudden thought of how sessy killed her baby and how STUPID she was for staying. and THEN, when i got to the part when he introduced his mistress, i almost DIED from anger. tehhe, and THEEEEN. kagome left. she had the BALLS to leave. exactly what i wanted in the beginning. TAHHA, that's awesome! i REALLY hope this time she doesn't look back. i REALLY hope so, or i might just go insane. really. Stupid whore. I mean that kitai or whatever. GRRRRRRR. MAN. stupid sessy. great job for getting me all riled up. thehe, UPDATE SOON PLEASE. CANT STAND THE SUSPENSE. how about that for a review.. :D:D:D

Hello, I love your story! I am a fan of a good romance story with angst, love, lemons and all others.. I find that your story hits all of things that I like especially centered around my favorite couple in the Inuyashaverse.

I love that you had Kagome standing up for herself in this chapter. I know that Sesshoumaru has been a huge jerk lately with Kagome especially when it comes to the other women he takes to his bed but I love that Kagome is fed up and had enough.

It will be very interesting to see if he will try to pull his tricks to make her stay or if the tough Kagome we all know and love will emerge and walk out of there with her head held high. Don't get me wrong even though I love the above to be part of a story, I also love happy endings.. I know, I'm weird... LOL. I know that this is your story and I don't want to take away from your creative flow...

but It would be great to read that Kagome as she walks away from his study, somehow removes her mating mark by purifying it, goes to her room and gathers her things, while Sesshoumaru feels the removal of the mating mark and tries to prevent her from leaving.

It's easy to forget sometimes that even though he is Lord Sesshoumaru, she is the Shikon priestess who is not weak, I just think she allowed the bad and wrong things done to her whether it was by Inuyasha or Sesshoumaru, because it was due to her love and loyalty to them....

I would love to see her away from the castle scene for a period of time to witness her strength renew and Sesshoumaru living the life with his mistress or other women, to eventually realize what he lost and try to get her back, which would not be easy.

I hope that you are open to suggestions and my thoughts and hope that you don't take offense to these and If you have, I thouroughly and sincerely apologize.

I absolutely LOVE story and can't wait to see what you have planned for my favorite couple. I hope all is well and that you update soon!

Take care! :)

Your fan,
Sesshoumaru's Lady